After getting responses back from my peers and Dr. Archibald, I decided to make a few changes to my Prezi to make it more effective.
First, both classmates and Dr. A found it strange that the homeless guy handed the boy a bible to read, so I took that part out. I still have the bible part in there and I'm hoping the audience can formulate some speculation of how he got the bible. He either brought it with him, or found it. I also moved some images around to make the paths flow better together. I rearranged the bible verses to do some text zooming. I also added a tiny bit more text and some more small effects. I also changed some of the text to make it more clear of who the boy was talking about when he was complaining about his problems in the beginning.
First, both classmates and Dr. A found it strange that the homeless guy handed the boy a bible to read, so I took that part out. I still have the bible part in there and I'm hoping the audience can formulate some speculation of how he got the bible. He either brought it with him, or found it. I also moved some images around to make the paths flow better together. I rearranged the bible verses to do some text zooming. I also added a tiny bit more text and some more small effects. I also changed some of the text to make it more clear of who the boy was talking about when he was complaining about his problems in the beginning.